Transform Your Manuscript: From Pages to Publication-Ready
Every great book starts with a strong story—and finishes with writing that truly lands.
Manuscript Evaluation Services
Find the Truth in Your Manuscript
You don’t need another vague critique or surface-level edit. You need to know—clearly and honestly—what’s working, what’s not, and how to move forward.
Everything I offer is built around one core goal: helping you see your manuscript as a reader experiences it, so you can strengthen it with intention
Manuscript Truth Audit
What it is:
A big-picture, honest evaluation of your manuscript.
What you get:
A clear breakdown of what’s working and what’s falling flat
Insight into where readers may disconnect (story, voice, pacing, clarity)
Direct, thoughtful feedback you can actually use
A roadmap for your next revision
Best for:
Writers who want clarity before revising or investing in deeper editing.
Truth Audit + Depth Expansion
What it is:
An expanded version of the Manuscript Truth Audit that moves from insight into execution.
What you get:
Everything in the Manuscript Truth Audit, plus:
Specific guidance on strengthening character depth and emotional impact
Direction on pacing, flow, and scene effectiveness
In-manuscript comments showing where and how to deepen the work
This is where your manuscript begins to transform on the page—not just in theory.
Best for:
Writers who want actionable direction to elevate their story, not just identify issues.
Truth Audit + Memoir Intensive
What it is:
A deep, interpretive expansion designed for memoir, personal, or emotionally-driven writing.
What you get:
Everything in the Manuscript Truth Audit + Depth Expansion, plus:
Insight into the deeper narrative thread of your story
Guidance on shaping meaning, not just structure
Identification of where the story holds back emotionally—and how to open it up
Developmental feedback that bridges storytelling and personal truth
This goes beyond editing—it helps you fully realize what your story is trying to say.
Best for:
Memoir and personal growth writers who want their work to create real emotional impact.
How it Works
Start with the Manuscript Truth Audit
Choose your depth level (Audit only, Depth Expansion, or Memoir Intensive)
Receive detailed feedback and a clear path forward
Not sure which level is right for you? Reach out, and I’ll help you decide.
PRICING
Manuscript Truth Audit - High Level Assessment - $0.025 / word
+Truth Audit & Depth Expansion - $0.015 / word
+Truth Audit & Memoir Intensive - $0.02 / word
Next Steps
Choose the service that fits your completed manuscript’s needs.
Contact me with your manuscript’s word count and a brief description of your project.
I’ll provide a personalized quote and timeline.
Prices are quoted in CAD and vary based on manuscript length and the level of editing required.
What You Can Expect
Short sample edit available
Comprehensive Editing and Guidance for language, structure, and emotional resonance
Respect for the Author’s Authentic Voice
Cultural Accuracy checks
Prompt and Responsive communication
Competitive Rates—lower range of EFA’s recent guideline rates
Contract and PayPal
Clear Edits via Microsoft Word Track Changes and Inline Comments
Fast Editing Turnaround times (21-30 business days)
Detailed Style Sheet for easy reference (available upon request before submission)
Flexible Payment Plan: 50% deposit; balance upon completion—Milestone Payment Plan used for Larger Projects: 50% deposit; 35% upon semi-completion; 15% upon completion
MORE SERVICES
Line and/or Copy Editing - spelling, grammar, punctuation, consistency/clarity, tone, flow, and word choice
Chapter Critiques (up to 10,000 words) – focused feedback on shorter sections or specific problem areas
Specialized Editing Packages for EFL/ESL Authors – supporting clarity, fluency, and authentic voice in English
Query Letters – polished and professional submissions to agents or publishers
Book Cover Descriptions – compelling, market-aligned copy that captures your book’s essence
Author Bios – authentic, professional profiles tailored for your website or publication needs
Dedication/Acknowledgment Pages – refined and heartfelt expressions of gratitude and intent
FAQ
Do you provide sample edits?
~A sample edit is available to give you a clear sense of my editing approach. If you decide to proceed with my services, the fee will be credited toward your total.
What currency do you use?
~Rates are listed in CAD.
Sample Feedback Examples
“The opening has a strong emotional premise, but it’s holding back where it matters most. You hint at the tension instead of letting the reader feel it directly, which creates distance. Right now, we understand what’s happening—but we’re not fully inside it.
The turning point in this scene is where the emotional weight should land, but it passes too quickly. Slowing this moment down and anchoring it in physical detail or internal reaction would deepen the impact significantly.
There’s also a compelling thread around control and vulnerability running underneath the narrative. It’s not fully brought forward yet, but it has the potential to unify the piece and give it a stronger emotional throughline.
Nothing here is broken, but this is a manuscript that will shift from ‘good’ to ‘memorable’ by going deeper, not wider.”